Nice comic, but maybe you should change some thing. In my first read I didn’t realize the guys in the second and third panels aren’t the same person. Well, they are the same… just not the SAME same person
I was never happy with the fact that I had to mix actual text in the punchline with symbols earlier in the comic. The square, triangle and circle, you don’t know what they are, but they were the right thing to say (see how what’s coming out of the mouth of other him is nothing but black: it was something vile). Consistency would’ve gone a long way to minimize confusion but reducing the state of a relationship to a clear readable symbol or image in the punchline was too much of a challenge for me back then.
If only…
Nice comic, but maybe you should change some thing. In my first read I didn’t realize the guys in the second and third panels aren’t the same person. Well, they are the same… just not the SAME same person
I don’t get what the square triangle and circle represent.
I was never happy with the fact that I had to mix actual text in the punchline with symbols earlier in the comic. The square, triangle and circle, you don’t know what they are, but they were the right thing to say (see how what’s coming out of the mouth of other him is nothing but black: it was something vile). Consistency would’ve gone a long way to minimize confusion but reducing the state of a relationship to a clear readable symbol or image in the punchline was too much of a challenge for me back then.